One time there was this fuzzy bee that was very bored so he went for a walk and then he saw a poster stuck to a lamppost to this old train station so he brought these tickets to an old train place and it was very unstable but he spent 10 dollars so he went in the train and the tracks weren't made out of metal but then the tracks started to break to be continued.
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